Dickinson uses the metaphor of a funeral to describe her inner struggles. What metaphor would you use to describe your own mind?

Prompt Response: My mind is like a crowded bustling city. It's always loud even through the night with flashing lights, music, people chattering and a sense of urgency. Traffic jams and honking in the proverbial roads throughout my mind. everyone is always doing something and the whole city is constantly alive without a moments of break.

Summary: We worked on on our hearts vs mind sheet and read a poem by Emily Dickinson

Reflection: I learned how some poets use their poems as reflections if their minds

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